Preliminary Exercice - LR
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WWW: In your opening seconds, your delayed tracking shot works really nicely, creating some space between yourself and the camera before following on. The immediate switch to the shot in the tree is a great change of angle and setting which is both attention-grabbing and creative. Your repeated motif of pointing towards yourself in line with the song is a simple but effective message reinforcing movement which is used to great effect.
Next Steps: I think you could afford to have more contrast between the positive protagonist and the antagonist that we only see a couple of times. This conflict would really drive home the overall message of the video. Remember, this video is about encouraging an improvement within a community, so perhaps some advisory moments encouraging lifestyle changes that could lead to this positive sense of self would be useful. Finally, I think the moving shots were some of your best and therefore having your main protagonist be followed whilst on the move could be a great message emphasiser in terms of following your lead.
2)
WWW: Good creativity, repeated motif
EBI: More of the antagonist, more of the message
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